Engl 206: Short Story. Student notes on Laurence, "The Loons"

narrative aspects interpretation theoretical aspects
e.g., Vanessa sees the new Piquette with bright lipstick; suggests V. knew what she really was during the summer at the cottage; V. notices changes but aims to treat her the same way parallel of loons and Piquette; inability to change themselves and their environment; loons unable to adapt to modern human invasion; Piquette unable to escape the lifestyle imposed on her

 

narrator tells story in hindsight which reduces the sentimentality and strengthens the ideas the narrator communicates;
setting becomes important at end: only when natural habitat of lake is destroyed that Vanessa sees the natural part of Piquette

loons are losing their home, and there is nowhere that Piquette truly fits in stereotypes: town sees Piquette as typical native, including Vanessa; this is why P. is shunned; only at the end does V. see who she really was
Piquette limited by the setting, set up for disaster, expectations that can't be met;
only father and daughter listen to the loons; Piquette symbolized by loons, cries out for help; but only father and daughter come close to hearing her
story illustrates futility of Piquette's life; begins stereotypically, and stereotyped by those around her; attempts to break free by marrying, but ends back where she started and dies stereotypes: Piquette, her family: outcasts, outsiders, "half-breeds"; drunk, get into brawls; P's change, chooses another stereotype by marrying; mother's motivation for P. coming that summer is false; grandmother: stubborn, close-minded, opposite of father
narrative technique, first person, reflects exploration of time;
story starts with narration of present and discussion of upcoming summer, then moves to present tense of that summer; then past tense memory, reflection on that summer;
parallelisms in description of lake/cottage setting; repetition of 'half-breed', etc.
theme of growing up, passage of time; understanding of others and their views grows over time

 

stereotypes: Piquette's speech, mannerisms, where she lives, how she dies; changing of name of lake -- ethnic other/loss of identity;
narrator: limited omniscient
story is ultimately about death/loss, things coming to an end epiphany: Vanessa comes to realize Piquette the only one who really heard the cry of the loons; at the end the loons, father, and Piquette are gone;
present moment: loss of innocence, childhood naivety, sentimental ideals (i.e., times on dock with father)
Vanessa's point of view: did not see who Piquette really is, her emotions; V. at times unsure how she felt towards Piquette Piquette like the loons: you have to listen closely to their cries; loss: the loons, the old town, and Piquette all disappear by end inner world of Vanessa when she returns to lake at end of story; epiphany: V. realizes that P. the only one to understand the cry of the loons
issues of belonging: neither Cree nor French (197); V's discomfort with P. show how P. cannot belong in the world;
symbolism: Piquette/loon metaphor
explores issues of marginalization in communities; it takes the move from childhood to adulthood before Vanessa realizes the loss of Piquette in the world individual isolation (O'Connor);
spiritual vs. absurd: V's loss of loons a tragic spiritual moment

 

 

stereotypes: Vanessa imposes her own on Piquette, a 'noble savage' in touch with nature; but Piquette "a dead loss" as an Indian (200);
town sees Piquette and family as half breeds; satisfies expectations when she dies

 

 

 

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Document prepared March 18th 2001